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| author | Ulf Lamping <ulf.lamping@web.de> | 2004-08-06 20:52:48 +0000 |
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| committer | Ulf Lamping <ulf.lamping@web.de> | 2004-08-06 20:52:48 +0000 |
| commit | ca1d8cf41936253b9ede2f9b5c7ff1c305341c52 (patch) | |
| tree | f8539cc0ede97c075207dae2fbb0bb13366936d8 /docbook/ug-src | |
| parent | f1cfc2a9e3fbfc38cb5d117567634f20e79c625c (diff) | |
some final review comment from Graeme Hewson, changed version to release 2.00
svn path=/trunk/; revision=11617
Diffstat (limited to 'docbook/ug-src')
| -rw-r--r-- | docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml | 7 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml | 6 |
2 files changed, 6 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml index 694e362904..71b263904d 100644 --- a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml +++ b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml @@ -49,10 +49,9 @@ tcpdump -i <interface> -s 1500 -w <some-file> <title>tethereal: Terminal-based Ethereal</title>
<para>
<application>Tethereal</application> is a terminal oriented version
- of ethereal designed for capturing and displaying packets when you
- do not have a graphical environment available. It is command line
- oriented only and will not show an SAA like user interface. It supports
- the same option set that <command>ethereal</command> does. For more
+ of ethereal designed for capturing and displaying packets when an
+ interactive user interface isn't necessary or available. It supports
+ the same options as <command>ethereal</command>. For more
information on <command>tethereal</command>, see the manual pages
(<command>man tethereal</command>).
</para>
diff --git a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml index 47b4d571c4..6e1a86900a 100644 --- a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml +++ b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml @@ -211,9 +211,9 @@ <section id="ChAdvNameResolutionSection"><title>Name Resolution</title>
<para>
Name resolution tries to resolve some of the address values to human
- readable names. This conversion might fail, e.g. if the specific name is
- just unknown. Some of the lookups are done with data from your local
- machine, while others asking network services like DNS.
+ readable names. This conversion might fail. For example, the name might be
+ unknown. Some of the lookups are done with data from your local
+ machine, while others asking network services such as DNS.
</para>
<para>
XXX - add ipxnets name resolution explanation.
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