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author | ulfl <ulfl@f5534014-38df-0310-8fa8-9805f1628bb7> | 2004-08-06 20:52:48 +0000 |
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committer | ulfl <ulfl@f5534014-38df-0310-8fa8-9805f1628bb7> | 2004-08-06 20:52:48 +0000 |
commit | ffafe8be05b91f9b4c395f72da190299dcbf0a16 (patch) | |
tree | f8539cc0ede97c075207dae2fbb0bb13366936d8 | |
parent | a272a6d9231658b5d1dfa221cb1dc8f26af80628 (diff) |
some final review comment from Graeme Hewson, changed version to release 2.00
git-svn-id: http://anonsvn.wireshark.org/wireshark/trunk@11617 f5534014-38df-0310-8fa8-9805f1628bb7
-rw-r--r-- | docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml | 7 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | docbook/user-guide.xml | 2 |
3 files changed, 7 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml index 694e362904..71b263904d 100644 --- a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml +++ b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_app_tools.xml @@ -49,10 +49,9 @@ tcpdump -i <interface> -s 1500 -w <some-file> <title>tethereal: Terminal-based Ethereal</title>
<para>
<application>Tethereal</application> is a terminal oriented version
- of ethereal designed for capturing and displaying packets when you
- do not have a graphical environment available. It is command line
- oriented only and will not show an SAA like user interface. It supports
- the same option set that <command>ethereal</command> does. For more
+ of ethereal designed for capturing and displaying packets when an
+ interactive user interface isn't necessary or available. It supports
+ the same options as <command>ethereal</command>. For more
information on <command>tethereal</command>, see the manual pages
(<command>man tethereal</command>).
</para>
diff --git a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml index 47b4d571c4..6e1a86900a 100644 --- a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml +++ b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_advanced.xml @@ -211,9 +211,9 @@ <section id="ChAdvNameResolutionSection"><title>Name Resolution</title>
<para>
Name resolution tries to resolve some of the address values to human
- readable names. This conversion might fail, e.g. if the specific name is
- just unknown. Some of the lookups are done with data from your local
- machine, while others asking network services like DNS.
+ readable names. This conversion might fail. For example, the name might be
+ unknown. Some of the lookups are done with data from your local
+ machine, while others asking network services such as DNS.
</para>
<para>
XXX - add ipxnets name resolution explanation.
diff --git a/docbook/user-guide.xml b/docbook/user-guide.xml index eec8cc91a2..7f25cb9fde 100644 --- a/docbook/user-guide.xml +++ b/docbook/user-guide.xml @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ DOCUMENT SECTION <!ENTITY DocumentCopyrightYear "2004">
<!ENTITY DocumentEdition "Third ">
- <!ENTITY DocumentVersion "V1.94">
+ <!ENTITY DocumentVersion "V2.00">
<!ENTITY DocumentPubDate "2004">
<!ENTITY DocumentLegalNotice "<para>Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.1 or any later version published by the Free Software Foundation; with no Invariant Sections, with no Front-Cover Texts, and with no Back-Cover Texts.</para><para>All logos and trademarks in this document are property of their respective owner.</para>">
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